I really liked your website.
Then you let Milo, this “Walter Mitty”, hate-filled, bitter, over-weening, irredeemably arrogant, fraction-of-a-human-being post on it.
His writing makes me sad, and not just because of the subject matter.
I fear that one can quite easily detect that he did not complete either of his degree courses, despite his continued insistence on parading his having attended both Manchester and Cambridge Universities. It is worth noting that having attended is almost completely meaningless if one did not actually attain a degree.
To drop out of one degree course might be seen as misfortune, but to drop out of two is nothing but carelessness. To continue to attempt to dine-out on one’s attendance when it has become public knowledge that one did not complete either course is nothing short of pathetic.
His dropping out twice is self-confirmed here:
and yet he continues to use terms like “Cambridge educated” when writing about himself.
With regard to notes that I might give on his writing, you might want to point out to him, in your capacity as curator / editor on your site, that;
“Rampant hordes unsatisfied by apology, by careers ruined or by the sustained public humiliation and dark thoughts of suicide their profitless crusades inflict now demand to bathe in seas of blood, biting and scratching like wild animals until there is nothing left besides bones and the blubbering, quivering, tragic mess of someone who once dared to venture an opinion under the masthead of a national newspaper or prominent magazine.”
might, just possibly need to be at least two and possibly three sentences. Full stops are not a mark of weakness. Overly long sentences are almost always a mark of trying too hard to appear erudite.
Not only that, but:
“…dark thoughts of suicide their profitless crusades inflict now demand…”
probably ought to read:
“…dark thoughts of suicide, which their profitless crusades inflict, now demand…”
but what would I know..? Oh hold on, yes I actually hold a degree in English Literature, a degree that actually had a creative writing component. Yes, I probably would know.
I am unwilling to apply the red pen to the entire piece, but frankly your site deserves a better quality of writing.
Shame really, your website is a good idea, but I just cannot take it seriously any longer. Since allowing this tripe to appear amongst the pages of svbtle.com you have seriously diminished its overall quality.
By equating Milo Yiannopoulos with the description “great people” you have made a laughing stock out of your editorial vision.
You might want to read the following articles and think again about allowing his writing to grace your site:
P.S. I will be posting this email to my blog(s) as a public record of this communication. Forgive me, but Milo has a reputation for making wild claims about non-public correspondence etc. and I would far rather that this missive be a part of the public domain, so that there can be no confusion.